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Not Even Porcelain Like Can Be Like You

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 06:41:59 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

After the flower bath

Pedals still caught in hair

Trapped my eyes by the corner

I had to look straight at you and stare

Nothing has yet been as close to perfect as

You standing there wrapped in a towel still wet

Your hair was picked up back into a bun ever so refined

You stepped out of the bath tub carefully as not to show me too much

You knew it would drive me insane to see you like that and I would lose control

Any man would under the same situation as that which you had put me in

You are so more than statuesque and beautiful almost porcelain like

Like a doll I would have crafted to poses every detail I could facture

Still that doll could never be like you alive like you kind like you

It would lack your grace and fall and brake into a million pieces

It could never steal my heart like you and be free like you

And make me fall like only you can do for you

You are too much of everything I want

I want you now I have to have you now

In the only way I know how

Completely

I want you to be you with me

And be a apart of me

Completely

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-10-23 18:41:59]
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Re: Not Even Porcelain Like Can Be Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 07:52:43 PM AEST
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Very beautifull and romantic write.
Luv, huggs
emy

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