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Gone
Contributed by
Quilla
on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 06:33:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I see you standing there
Peering with your ice cold glare
Staring at me
Looking into me
Finding an empty soul
But a heart of gold
Free of guilt
Never done wrong
Fear of pain
Hiding all along
Writing on my walls
Working through it all
Life depicted in pictures
Nothing good at all
Loving without restraint
Killing without remorse
To be with the one I love
All part of my life's course
Now there is nothing
Silence
Complete silence
Darkness
Empty
Gone
All gone
Giving up without him
Nothing left to live for
Gone
......Gone......
Copyright ©
Quilla
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2004-10-23 18:33:28]
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Re: Gone
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:29:24 PM AEST
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Loved this.... your run-on lines add to the beauty of this poem..
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Re: Gone
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:50:31 AM AEST
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Cool peom
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