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Can't You All See?
Contributed by
Quilla
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Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 04:38:14 PM in AEST
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Can't you all see
The pain behind his mask?
Am I the only one
With the courage to ask?
Can't you all see
He's putting on a show?
Am I the only one
That will ever know?
Can't you all see
The tears in my eyes
Whenever I look at him
And begin to cry?
Can't you all see
How good your off,
When others are fighting
To stay on top?
Can't you all see
He needs friends by his side?
Not to pressure him,
But keep him alive.
Can't you all see
The way he's treated?
Poked, Joked,
Tormented, Beated?
Well I can see.
I'm not blind.
Come on and see!
Before he unwinds.....
Copyright ©
Quilla
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2004-10-23 16:38:14]
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Re: Can't You All See?
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 04:47:34 PM AEST
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| that was wonderful my love goes out ot youa nd your friend chris what ever doesn't kill you only makes you stronger |
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Re: Can't You All See?
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 04:55:34 PM AEST
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beautifully written, so sad...... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Can't You All See?
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by Evilnn on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 05:02:35 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem, very gracefully written.
Prayers go out to you and your friend. |
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Re: Can't You All See?
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 05:37:25 PM AEST
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A very caring and loving write...well done... Hope things get better for Chris....
Keep them coming..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Can't You All See?
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:33:25 PM AEST
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This is filled with emotion for your friend, excellent poem, and I agree...real friends would see his pain
Love Dawny x |
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