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the elements
Contributed by
bonewiz326
on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 02:57:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Gentle rain washes over me,
I feel it pour down my skin,
Its cleansing to set free,
So I feel...so brand new.
These are the elements that
forgave me when I flew away
and reminded me to stay.
Gravity keeps me here,
I feel it tug on my wings,
Its heavy to hault me,
But I know that I can push through,
These are the elements that
forgave me when I flew away
and reminded me to stay.
Sunshine enlightens me,
I feel it fill up my mind,
Its dreaming to make blind see,
Now I know dreams to come true,
These are the elements that
forgave me when I flew away
and reminded me to stay.
Air smells of spirit,
I feel it inspire me to go,
Its ready my road to be,
So I can I fly...like the birds do,
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Re: the elements
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:31:48 PM AEST
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Wonderful write. Very visual and imaginative. I enjoyed this muchly.
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Re: the elements
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by BECAUSE on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:31:29 AM AEST
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VERY CREATIVE AND A NICE JOURNEY
TO GO ON WITH YOU..... GOOD JOB!!! |
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