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Humanity
Contributed by
immortal_pain
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Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 12:29:15 PM in AEST
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A child of such beauty with such un-attended evil,
beaten nearly half to death by the cruelty of this world,
Such graceful ways of magnificence,
Has been smothered from her already tortured soul,
Time has eroded her life,
As a raging waterfall erodes the yet helpless rocks beneath it,
Ignorance has worn her thin patience,
That was once full and lissome,
Defaced by un-wanted fate,
Discrimination follows her like the irksome fly that refused to be gone,
Attachments are unheard of,
She is deprived from all that she loves,
A song sung so beautifully the world drowns in their begotten tears,
How can one remain withered and cruel,
How can one torture a child of such helplessness in such an unheard way,
The word humanity is spoken of often,
For most consider them selves humane,
Oh such noble and disgusting creatures,
With your last shred of humanity,
You killed and innocent child.
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Re: Humanity
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by pixie on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:10:11 PM AEST
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the world that we live in is very harsh and cruel sometimes and you have to be strong , easier said than done, an emotional write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Humanity
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by wakegurl77 on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 02:06:37 PM AEST
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i can relate... there is such great imagry in this poem its like i've been put back in the place i was when i found out about my uncle beaten and broken this poem it so amazing you put whoever reads this in the position where they know almost excatly what your talking about it also amazes me that you wrote this in 8th grade i my self am a freshman and to amagine writeing something that beautiful last year it wouldnt have happend its a great poem i truely love it
allways Sincere
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Re: Humanity
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by Quilla on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 04:04:01 PM AEST
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I can't say anything. This poem leaves me speechless, and wanting to cry a river....wonderful writing, m'dear. Wonderful. I hope things are getting better for you as the days go on.
God Bless,
Daniella |
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Re: Humanity
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by immortal_pain on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 10:27:30 PM AEST
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| aww thanks so much you guys, this is what i strive for in my poetry and writting none theless, realistic feelings to be able to creat a sence of reality for the reader *whipes tears* im a fresh man my self ^_^ |
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