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Clarity
Contributed by
OnlyInDeathITrulyLive
on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:06:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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With death so clear
I can only fear
What will happen in the end
When I loose the love for my only friend
I love her more than the eagles soar
I miss her more than the lions roar
She is taken
And that can not be mistaken
Never for me
Will she ever be
So here I am
Thinking in my head
Why must this happen
Oh God I wish I were dead
Feelings of lonliness
Feelings of sadness
No more feelings of happiness
No more feelings of gladness
With death so clear, I can only fear
What will happen in the end
Copyright ©
OnlyInDeathITrulyLive
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2004-10-23 11:06:03]
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Re: Clarity
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by lovingkk05 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:37:02 PM AEST
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That was really good. Except for one thing.... the way you ended it could have been diferent the one you have was ok it was just kind of flat.
Other then that I really liked it.
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Re: Clarity
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:34:57 PM AEST
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| Such a sad write. Cheers! |
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