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Love Never Dies
Contributed by
tan
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Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 04:02:06 AM in AEST
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The Sea seems to be in motion
Every moment speaks of joy
The wind an intoxicating potion
And the trees are like toys.
The moon is peeping down
The stars have something to say.
For all the joy they give to us
How are we going to pay?
And yet, when i look deep inside
My hear ache, I know i will cry
For everytime i think of you
I know my love shall never die.
Copyright ©
tan
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2004-10-23 04:02:06]
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Re: Love Never Dies
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 05:11:13 AM AEST
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Such a cute poem, i like it. thanks for posting.
Jane x |
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Re: Love Never Dies
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 06:42:47 AM AEST
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| Clever poem, well written...................Mike |
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Re: Love Never Dies
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by inoc on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 06:48:50 AM AEST
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well done and congratulations on your first poetry submittion...
well done and keep writing!~
cheers!~ |
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Re: Love Never Dies
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by pixie on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:03:20 AM AEST
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aww a very sweet write, good work
pixie xx |
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Re: Love Never Dies
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:39:33 AM AEST
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| Totally cool poem, awesome rythem, bit like a song in full melody, for your first write it has my top marks, you have untapped talent and beautiful stylings awesome write, unique yet well worth the read, cheers for sharing. |
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Re: Love Never Dies
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:07:25 AM AEST
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lovely:) hugs n' love nessa
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