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Did It Rain Today?
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:11:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Did it rain today?
Walking out of my room in the morn
I asked
The grass is wet and the clouds are high
But I
Did not hear a drop falling on my tin roof
These rainy days are so very sad
Some people enjoy them
But not I
The flowers that bloom in full morn
Have yet to fully blossom
This is very odd
Even the sun has hidden away
I walk under trees with leaves that hang
Heavy with the dew from drops of rain
Blue birds kiss and drink of this
I am suspicious of this
Maybe there to distract me
Something is very wrong
I open the back door and enter into the family room
But before I take off my saddles as I always do
I walk by the large sofa with my mother still passed out on it
I am ever so quiet as not to wake her
I head into the hallways and go into the bath room
I wash my face and teeth and the shower
Just like I always do
When I finish I dry my self and get dressed
My shorts shirt and shoes and watch
Just as I always do
The time on my watch is wrong I think maybe just the battery
So I open the door to your room
To kiss you farewell for the day
You are there sleeping heavily
So I will be a pain and wake you with a kiss
I get on the bed next to you and put my arms around
I kiss you on your forehead
And you awaken with a smile
We talk there for a while
I think I have plenty of time
We talk and talk and talk
Just like I love to with you
I tell you I love you and that
I am glad that you are my sis
But then I realize what is wrong
And I don’t want to pay it any attention
But there looking at you and how perfect you are
Almost a perfect reflection of my opposite self
After all we are twins even though not identical we
Still look much alike
And then I hear mother calling
And I cry as you fade away
This is what I was afraid of
You are not real
I open my eyes they are streaming with tears
I heavy knock comes at my door
It’s my mother
I quickly dry my eyes and kiss her as I do
She goes off to work
And I start to cry again
Why do my dreams do this to me?
I don’t know if they do me more good than bad
But then I remember how beautiful you were
I walk out side and it’s all wet
Drops of rain begin to pour
A rush inside the family room
And leave my shoes at the door
I am by my self here now
And so I walk to the hallway then to the bathroom
I do all the things I have to
And walk out to the room
Hoping that you are there
Sleeping but you’re not
All I have is my memory
Of this dream that I had
To get me through the day
It helps but is not suffice
I go off to work and come home
I go off into my room and fall asleep
Hoping to dream of you
When I need someone in my life
And nor lover nor friends can suffice
All I really need is you
Someone who is so much like me
But better in every way
Every time I dream of you
I never want you to fade away
But you do sadly
As all perfect things must do
You are to seraphic to beautiful
Not really meant for this world
That’s why I could not have you
In my life everyday
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Doriens_Picture
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2004-10-23 01:11:12]
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Re: Did It Rain Today?
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:06:44 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written, and so emotionally sad, powerful images flowed forth from the entire poem, leaving me astounded, and tears streaming, cool and vivid, of sadness complete. |
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Re: Did It Rain Today?
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:07:58 AM AEST
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| beautiful |
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Re: Did It Rain Today?
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by remote on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:45:47 PM AEST
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| This is one good narrative, captivated me from the first line till the last. |
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