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Wrong
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:46:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Deep and dark
Just like before
Its to much *****
Cant take nemore
The life I live
Is fallen apart
I cant take
The ***** that you start
Catch the blood
So they wont see
Catch the blood
Dripping from my ring
Slowly it lingers
Out of my wrist
Into my hand
My soul I clench
My soul, the pain
The misery
Breaking my heart
In front of me
Copyright ©
tractorbabe
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2004-10-22 21:46:28]
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Re: Wrong
(User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 10:28:25 PM AEST
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| tractorbabe..can I call you babe? lol..we gotta get you some words you can use so the mods don't use up all those little starz..rotfl... It's not even a four letter word..it's a five..so your vocabulary is pretty good!! Rock On. Stop the blood Flo..pleezzzzz. I can't take all this heartache..it's making me so sad....good write tho..I so want everyone to be happy..:-*) |
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Re: Wrong
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by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 10:46:08 PM AEST
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Love it. Just, let the words flow and not nething else, k? I love you! Smile, be happy!
Sid |
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Re: Wrong
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by bobose on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:11:49 AM AEST
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dude cuttin urself makes things worst
so stop
think happy
wen ur deperessed u cant take it out on urself |
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