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Wanting you
Contributed by
Gimpie
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:45:37 PM in AEST
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Emotions can be bottled though they eventually come forth
Burning brighter than the sun
like a beacon on a port
All too often frightening they can harbor many thoughts
The equivalent to tiny fish
That just never can be bought
MY feelings, blunt and true, scare me straight into my soul
For something now has taken shape
Where once there was a hole
That emptiness was comforting for there never was a change
No twists or bends, or curves
That now can make me feel deranged
Yet there is something wonderful in feelings all anew
For I realize that all I want
Is nothing short of you.
Copyright ©
Gimpie
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Re: Wanting you
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 10:10:59 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. maybe the title could be wanting you...i guess? |
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Re: Wanting you
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by a_bear on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:24:41 PM AEST
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good write..great in fact. What about
Filling the Emptiness.
The Change is You?
Nothing Short of You..
Feelings All Anew?
What I realize?
I'll stop now..
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Re: Wanting you
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 12:35:35 AM AEST
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Good write. maybe the title could be: All i want is you.
Jane |
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Re: Wanting you
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:15:00 AM AEST
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its really a beautiful write
wish some one i knew would make her
feelings for me that clear well i guess i liked
The Change is You?
from one of the previous posts |
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Re: Wanting you
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by MayaByrd on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:56:09 AM AEST
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| just a suggestion: a certain sensation, my realization...? :-) |
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