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The First Cut
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:42:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The first cut
It hurts inside
The first cut
Will never die
The first cut
Again and again
The first cut
Will never end
The first cut
It hurts you see
The first cut
Is killing me
The first cut
Needs to bleed
And erase
Every memory
But that don’t happen
Don’t you see
The first cut
Never ends for me
Copyright ©
tractorbabe
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2004-10-22 21:42:40]
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Re: The First Cut
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by Gimpie on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:48:58 PM AEST
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| This is good. I really like the repetition of "the first cut" :) good job :) |
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Re: The First Cut
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by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 10:17:02 PM AEST
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This poem hits very close to home. Great job. I love it.
Sid |
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Re: The First Cut
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 10:17:30 PM AEST
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| Mmmm... I really liked this poem. It was really good. Great job. I really liked the flow. And the rhyming.... |
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Re: The First Cut
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by bobose on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:16:35 AM AEST
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obviuosly if it hurts so *****in bad then u shouldnt do it
have u ever listened to ur body
wen something hurts its sayin get me away
so listen plz fr ur body's sake |
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Re: The First Cut
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by pixie on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:10:01 AM AEST
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powerful words, have been there too *hugs* hope that your cuts will heal in time,
pixie xx |
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Re: The First Cut
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by immortal_pain on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:16:32 AM AEST
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| wonderful, i loved it. nice work. it really tells how you feel about pain and the eternity of it all. |
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