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Staircase
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:23:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Singing peacefully under the steps of madness.
Trying hard to keep the spaces kept.
The jump down is so far.
No banister to hold on to.
I have to depend on myself now.
I can't take the next turn.
I laugh at the people below me.
Seeing how helpless they look.
That must have been me.
I'm true to the white now.
My skin as ashes.
My eyes as blood.
My brain as sludge.
I'm running down a slide of momentum.
I know I'm lost...
I'm speeding up.
I can't stop.
A race...
That I no longer compete in.
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Sirena_Degana
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2004-10-22 20:23:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Staircase
(User Rating: 1 ) by thewordzwithin on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:18:43 PM AEST (User
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I like this poem. I love when poets give life to lifeless objects. Full of emotion. Hope to read more. |
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Re: Staircase
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:27:34 PM AEST (User
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great write |
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Re: Staircase
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:14:00 AM AEST (User
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great write , intresting expression used here,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Staircase
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:13:21 AM AEST (User
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love it |
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