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Not Giving Up
Contributed by
Kericka
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 06:54:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When trust is the one thing you seek, and the look in his eyes makes my knees go week. After so many cold hearted girls make a man cold hearted, just when I think I'm getting somewhere, I'm right back where I started. When I am screaming inside to make you understand, but you make me feel like I'm sinking in quicksand. If I tell you I will not do you wrong, you don't believe me because you've heard that song. When I am around you it makes sense and the pain disappears, and you not believing in me I'd rather die drowning in my fears. So maybe I should become cold hearted too, but God is telling me not to give up on you.
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Re: Not Giving Up
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 07:07:39 PM AEST (User
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excellent write. very well written. |
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Re: Not Giving Up
(User Rating: 1 ) by thewordzwithin on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:29:14 PM AEST (User
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Great poem! Full of emotion. I'm sorry the man isn't treating you the way you would like, but love when it isn't what you want can scar you. Believe me, I know. The trick is to not let the scar become apart of your skin. |
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