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Love Bites
Contributed by
chaos_wizard
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 06:53:40 PM in AEST
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Love bites when you least except it love will come up and bite you in the ass.
It will send you crying with pain. She cheats on you, you stay straight and she keeps on a lying.
She makes you feel good right before she says "we weren't meant for each other."
Then you walk away with nothing more then a wounded heart beat, stabbed and bleeding fearlesly.
Looking around now shoulder to cry on, nore a friend to lean on.
Yes Because Love Bites!!!!!!!!
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Re: Love Bites
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by girish on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:34:13 PM AEST
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| may be love bites but i am going to really bite you |
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Re: Love Bites
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by greeneyes on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:44:35 PM AEST
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Ouch, this poem bites, very good, right to the point.
Nancy |
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Re: Love Bites
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by Stoney1 on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 07:28:12 AM AEST
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The whole effort reeks of carelessness.
Love bites when you least ex{-p}{-c}e{+c}{-p}t it
love will come up and bite you in the ass.
It will send you crying with pain
She cheats on you, you stay straight
and she keeps on {-a} lying
She makes you feel good
right before she says{+,} "{+W}{-w}e weren't meant for each other."
Then you walk away with nothing more
th{+a}{-e}n a wounded heartbeat, stabbed and bleeding fearles{+s}ly
Looking around{+,} no{-w} shoulder to cry on,
nor{-e} a friend to lean on.
Yes{+,} {-B}{+be}cause {-L}{+l}ove {-B}{+b}ites!{-!!!!!!!}
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edit marks removed:
Love bites when you least expect it
love will come up and bite you in the ass
It will send you crying with pain
She cheats on you, you stay straight
and she keeps on lying
She makes you feel good
right before she says,"We weren't meant for each other."
Then you walk away with nothing more
than a wounded heartbeat, stabbed and bleeding fearlessly
Looking around, no shoulder to cry on,
nor a friend to lean on.
Yes, because love bites! |
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