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Bloody Vengance
Contributed by
SugimotoYouki
on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 06:51:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I've spend my whole life with you
gave my everytihng to suit your expectations
and all i got was laughs and abuse
but now you've gone to far
oh how I hate it
how I hate you all
for everytihng you've done to me...
DIE!!!
I want you on the floor
cringe in pain and fear
oh how I'll miss thee
these wimphered please for forgiveness
I want to slice you,
and lick away the running blood
bumble my senses, sweet, sweet vengance
with the tast of blood
Take a waya the pain with statisfaction
burn the delicous sight into my mind
my first and last masacre
'cause an enemies blood is the very sweetst....
Copyright ©
SugimotoYouki
... [
2004-10-22 18:51:14]
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Re: Bloody Vengance
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 07:09:35 PM AEST
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| good write. i like the psychotic part of it. |
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Re: Bloody Vengance
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:19:56 AM AEST
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| I like this alot its a vent and I vented along with you when I read it, nice work its almost cathartic |
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