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Who Am I?
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 05:41:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Who am I, I really don’t know?
My personality changes when the wind blows,
Am I really me or am I someone else,
Am I a figment of tormented mental health?
When I look in the mirror who do I see?
I’m not sure the person looking back is me,
It is a face that I do not recognise,
Or is it me hiding behind a disguise?
Am I really living or is it a dream?
Can you hear any sound when I scream?
Am I real or am I make believe,
Is it me or my eyes that deceive?
I have so many different faces,
Some hide out in scary places,
Some are pretty & easy on the eye,
Others are twisted & make you want to die.
I don’t know if I am here or there,
As I sit silently into space I stare,
Trying to piece together the fragments of my mind,
Trying to find my eyes so I am no longer blind.
I never know who will be in control,
Of my shattered & torn soul,
Which part of me will rear its ugly head?
The one that is alive or the one that is dead?
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pixie
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2004-10-22 17:41:38]
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Re: Who Am I?
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 06:19:36 PM AEST
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all i know is that there are many parts and pieces that make up a person be who they are, and in you, i like what i see, a beautiful soul:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Who Am I?
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 07:53:40 PM AEST
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| good write. |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 03:52:35 AM AEST
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| Such a pain filled yet beautiful poem you have written. I know this very struggle. You are very talented in your writing. Awesome poem! |
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