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The Pain of Love
Contributed by
Mesano
on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 05:17:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The thoughts have gone,
As quickly as they came,
I love him still...
But its just not the same.
The pain, the anger...
The frustration, the shame,
My stupidity, my confusion,
Says I am to blame.
None of it matters,
Theres nothing I can do,
The love is still there,
But the pain cuts right through.
Silent tears down my face,
A fire in my heart,
But its not over...You can't end
What never had a start.
Copyright ©
Mesano
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2004-10-22 17:17:30]
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Re: The Pain of Love
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by a_bear on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 05:31:50 PM AEST
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| you took what was in my heart and gave it legs..thanks |
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Re: The Pain of Love
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 07:56:47 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: The Pain of Love
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:37:42 AM AEST
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| wow this was truly an amazing poem i loved it!! it was so real filled with emotions grreat job!! |
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Re: The Pain of Love
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by Dawny on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 10:49:54 AM AEST
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Wow, I say it again...WOW!!!
Really like this, you can feel the pain, it drips of everyword. I hope if this is based on you, that you find love xx
Love Dawny xxx |
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