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no dawn
Contributed by
sid_the_tampon_fairy
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 04:34:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Another day goes by and still no dawn
Another day without silver lining
Can't seem to find the good out of bad
My chin's to heavy to hold
My sun won't shine until the phone starts ringing
Wanna hear your voice at the end of my line
End of the rope, last chance
To be mine
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sid_the_tampon_fairy
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2004-10-22 16:34:27]
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Re: no dawn
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by a_bear on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 05:15:00 PM AEST
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I just have to say this: when you're at the end of your rope..make a noose. there I finally got to say that. sorry.
great write..hope you're chin lifts.. |
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Re: no dawn
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:11:33 PM AEST
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| great write. =] |
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Re: no dawn
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 10:22:20 PM AEST
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I really liked your poem, especially the first stanza. Kudos! But hope you start hving a better time of things.
Felix The Great |
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Re: no dawn
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by Sirena_Degana on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:46:14 AM AEST
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well...is this about you no who..or the other you no who..well meh this a good one hon!!! much emotion..
blessed be
sirena |
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