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Surrender
Contributed by
lovesucks
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 04:11:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I surrender to you on my knees
Save me from the demons I see
Take my hand, free my soul
I surrender, take control
Release these chains
that keep me restrained
I shed a tear
I feel the fear
God, please help me out of here
this hell
this sin
all this pain I hold within
Save me from this fate
God, please save me before it's late
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lovesucks
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2004-10-22 16:11:51]
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Re: Surrender
(User Rating: 1 )
by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 04:38:11 PM AEST
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Wow. This is an extremely powerful piece. I absolutly love it. I'll be looking forward to your poems. You've got a fan for life.
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Re: Surrender
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by a_bear on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 05:19:07 PM AEST
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Some things are sticking
but my mouse ain't clicking
it won't take me home
but I liked your poem.
Not fond of the plot
liked the rhyme a lot
I chew it and chew it
but I still can't do it.
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Re: Surrender
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:13:21 PM AEST
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| excellent write. very powerful indeed. |
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Re: Surrender
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by SLipSiX on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:59:54 AM AEST
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| Very very powerfull poem, Awesome words, Excellent work. |
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