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Good Days & Bad Days
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 12:09:35 PM in AEST
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I have my good days & my bad days,
Sometimes I wish life would just go away,
Other days I am full of the joys of spring,
Wondering what the next day will bring.
Sometimes I can’t lift my head from my pillow,
Theses are days when my hearts full of woe,
There are days when I can’t seem to sit still,
I am happy with no help from any pill.
Some days I cry my eyes out for no reason,
Just seems happiness is out this season,
I carry no hope & feel like giving up,
Feel like the last & unwanted pup.
Sadness really does knock me for six,
Has me right at the end of my wit,
I can’t see any way out but to die,
Tell people I love them & say goodbye.
But I know I am a fighter, who can win,
One who won’t throw her hope into the bin,
I have stayed sane throughout my entire trauma,
Even though my depression has been quite a performer.
One day I am up the next day I’m down,
But I just keep picking myself up off the ground,
Does that make me stronger or do I become weak?
Will I ever find out the answers which I seek?
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pixie
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Re: Good Days & Bad Days
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 12:22:26 PM AEST
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You will oneday find what your heart does seek, for you have the strength of a queen, and the beauty of an angel, you bring joy to all, and peace to many, Im glad you are a friend, and do hope with all my heart, that you find the answers you do so seek.
You are an awesome writer, and your poems, show so much feeling, wheter down and out or happy and smiling, I love reading your poems, you are a beautiful poet, keep on writting.
Take Care always
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Re: Good Days & Bad Days
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by a_bear on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 01:42:45 PM AEST
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| great poem pix..like a yo-yo or a rubber ball I am with the ups and downs. I just found another poetry group for myself too..along with this not instead of..it's for people with manic depression..pretty cool. They understand the insanity of me.. great write, btw. |
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Re: Good Days & Bad Days
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:31:46 PM AEST
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wonderful write as always, you are a well of talent, which has sun or moonshine always touching its waters. hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Good Days & Bad Days
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by Kie on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 10:31:21 AM AEST
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Yes this is so true Pixie we all have the good and bad days. I understood your poem and thought about it. I've come to realize for myself, that life is so short and every day I let go by in a blaze of nothingness is a day I can never retrieve.
I look for the positive's in life. In everything, everyone. I give myself, because sometimes that in itself lifts my spirit.
I really liked what your poem had to say and I believe your ordeal will make you stronger. Hang tight & keep on writing.
Kie |
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