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sub zero weather
Contributed by
bonewiz326
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Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:01:15 PM in AEST
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welcome to the land of extremes,
where too cold is half of how cold it really is,
wind is hell cause it burns on your skin,
a blistering frigid inferno dancing on your outsides,
but you're inside out,
cause the very bones seem to freeze,
freeze solid.
you're a block of ice.
blood screams mercy in cold veins,
where too warm is half of how warm you'd like to be,
but those aren't thoughts of extremes.
it's like your very survival is on ice.
chilled like a wine as you ferment in some arctic manner.
every second like 100 years.
the shakes make you think of nothing but how you tremble,
like in some sort of chilled fear.
the elements in recent are to be respected.
humbly bowing your head into your scarf.
an homage to unbreakable freezing.
every instant that we fight sub-zero,
is every instant we don't win,
we'll freeze and wait
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Re: sub zero weather
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:10:55 PM AEST
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Wow this made me soooooo cooooooooold. I need my blankie. Are we in Iceland. lol
Much peace this was different and I liked it. |
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Re: sub zero weather
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by mckayla on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 12:17:10 AM AEST
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Sounds like the weather where I live its been snowing all week!!! Or it could be explaination of my ex-husbands heart!!!!! LoL!!
mckayla |
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Re: sub zero weather
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by blueyes11 on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 12:59:44 PM AEST
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| this was really well done, bonewiz326. Great descriptions. Growing up, for part of the time, in the snow belt of Canada, I can say that you really hit the nail on the head about the cold. But now, you made me look at it in a way I never have before : "humbly bowing your head into your scarf. an homage to unbreakable freezing." AWESOME JOB! |
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Re: sub zero weather
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 11:05:24 PM AEST
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| in alabama we are lucky to hit the 10 degrees. its stereotypically 90 here all the time. |
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