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A Relationship
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:38:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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No man or woman
is worth your tears
No matter how right it is
or how it appears
If you ever find one that is
they won't make you cry
They will keep you happy
until the day you die
A Relationship with love
is God's gift to you
Keeping each other happy
by what you say and do
When you find that right person
treasure them with your heart
Build on that Relationship
each day from the start
The rewards never ending
and your love is so real
Surrounded in happiness
is just how you feel
No need to say thank you
to the one that you love
It was given to you
by the Lord up above
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-10-21 22:38:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Relationship
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:45:47 PM AEST (User
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Wise words, Bruce...
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Re: A Relationship
(User Rating: 1 ) by alliecat on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:47:37 PM AEST (User
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awwww......i loved your poem.....it was very good
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Re: A Relationship
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:56:56 PM AEST (User
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Absolutely correct, my friend.
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Re: A Relationship
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dusty on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:59:21 PM AEST (User
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What a great poem. This is so very true!
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Re: A Relationship
(User Rating: 1 ) by Seans_Girl on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:20:30 AM AEST (User
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Aww that's so sweet |
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Re: A Relationship
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 05:22:27 AM AEST (User
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a great write Bruce, loved it :)
pixie xx |
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Re: A Relationship
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 05:31:09 AM AEST (User
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so true so true Bruce
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Re: A Relationship
(User Rating: 1 ) by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:49:45 AM AEST (User
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Very true words. The lord gives and the lord can take away Bruce.
For he is the almighty one
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx |
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Re: A Relationship
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 04:32:23 PM AEST (User
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yes, truelove is a rare gift:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Relationship
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stew on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:51:25 PM AEST (User
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i really like this poem and i wish i could relate to it, but it seems i will never find the right one for me. |
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