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If Only
Contributed by
WIldfireRose
on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:10:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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His scent sends me into an undescribable bliss
His eyes make me shiver and sigh
I have longed so greatly for his kiss
When he is near I feel as if I could fly
I love every movement he makes
And every word he does say
With every breath he takes
My heart sings a symphony
And my spirit hums a melody
I swoon when he looks at me
And melt away when he touches me
If only he would be mine
As I am his until the end of time
Copyright ©
WIldfireRose
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2004-10-21 21:10:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: If Only
(User Rating: 1 ) by Adonia_Donata on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:12:54 PM AEST (User
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You express your feeling very well. Watch your rythm just a little bit. Try to even out the flow. Overall, a great write. |
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