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Why...
Contributed by
Kione
on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:08:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I know how I feel about you,
Why,
Why do I do the things I do,
Why,
I make you happy,
I make myself unhappy,
Why must I put myself last in life,
It doesn't make sense,
Maybe I wasn't...
No,
I have to let you go,
You've told me before,
But I can't,
Can't just let you go,
I can't let myself do that,
You have someone,
I don't,
If only I could,
Could have you,
But no,
You've told me,
No...
Copyright ©
Kione
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2004-10-21 21:08:36]
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Re: Why...
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by Adonia_Donata on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:15:30 PM AEST
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| Awesome write! You used not only your words, but the rhythm to express your feeling, your emotion...beautiful! Definetly an awesome write... |
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Re: Why...
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by Adonia_Donata on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:15:39 PM AEST
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| Awesome write! You used not only your words, but the rhythm to express your feeling, your emotion...beautiful! Definetly an awesome write... |
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Re: Why...
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:21:13 PM AEST
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I really like this one.you are improving nicely. P.S. love yourself first if you expect others to love you.
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