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i gave you my love, but my heart you stole
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:45:42 PM in AEST
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i woke up this morning
thinking of love, thinking of you
all it took, was just one look
and now i have to pay loves due
with one glance, just one smile
you did so much, in such a short while
your presance here, your laughter there
stolen was my every moment but i dont care
it may be said, my heart i gave to you
a price i willingly pay, but
i gave you my dreams, i gave you my soul
i gave you my love, but my heart you stole
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2004-10-21 20:45:42]
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Re: i gave you my love, but my heart you stole
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by Adonia_Donata on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:20:44 PM AEST
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| A great write, truly enjoyed it. Watch the rhythm on the last two stanzas, especially the last. Overall a very good write. |
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Re: i gave you my love, but my heart you stole
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:35:30 PM AEST
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Beautiful write....I loved it..
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