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Left Alone I Cry
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
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Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:23:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Nobody really wants me around.
I'm like a piece of clothing, left in the lost and found.
Left alone to die.
Nobody thinks that I even cry.
They think that I'm some emotionless child, little do they know that my emotions run wild.
They know nothing about me, I'm weined from my childhood hugs and kisses.
I may seem terrible on the outside, a monster indeed.
But on the inside I'm a frightened little child, this is the real me.
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Re: Left Alone I Cry
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:26:40 PM AEST
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| Good poem. You expressed your emotions well. I think we all feel this way at one time or another. |
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Re: Left Alone I Cry
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:37:54 PM AEST
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| wow i like again a good write |
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Re: Left Alone I Cry
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by Dusty on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:02:42 PM AEST
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POwerful, short but emotional. I loved it.
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Re: Left Alone I Cry
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by -Lord-Vince-Black- on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:41:59 AM AEST
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Dark, emotinal, reconize the feeling etc.
Again a nice piece of poetry
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Re: Left Alone I Cry
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 01:39:56 PM AEST
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so sad how no one truly knows the real us...the just judge by what they see...not by what the know from actually knowing the person from within...great poem....
please comment on my work too
summer
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