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Autumn's Touch
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:53:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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With her magical paintbrush
She swallows the greenery with rustic hues.
Her tasteful wind entices the fluttering leaves
To dance down to a soft, warm earth.
Her Midas touch creates a golden fairytale.
A sublime serenity, unspeakably soothing.
The air's warm scent swirls in magnificence,
Nature sings to a harmonizing horizon.
Her gentle and subtle existence alone
Stirs up a mindful of memories...
Of cozy fireplaces, enchanting books,
Growing smiles, waning fears.
Her gentle hand caresses my thoughts,
My heart warming in her embrace.
Her days are that of peace and beauty.
Her life, her touch subdued with grace.
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eatfresh22
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Re: Autumn's Touch
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 07:10:14 PM AEST
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| beautiful rendition of nature! |
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Re: Autumn's Touch
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:01:49 PM AEST
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Wow! I'm impressed with this one. The picture you've painted is lovely, my friend.
Bravo! |
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Re: Autumn's Touch
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 05:47:53 AM AEST
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I wish the weather were like that here. It's a cold and drizzly autumn this year, unfortunately. It's making me actually want winter, something I've never wanted before.
I'm so glad you've captured nature the way you have. You're paying attention just like I do now.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea
PS-
Your letter(S) are in the mail today. You'll understand why I waited when you read the second one. |
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Re: Autumn's Touch
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 01:08:32 PM AEST
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A great poem, Carrie. Awesome. Your imagery is vivid.
Take care, my love.
David |
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