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I feel like…
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 02:06:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Confusion,
Mixed emotions.
Fixed on pain.
No more illusion,
But this feeling’s still the same.
This rotten feeling,
Where I’m being eaten away.
This drowning feeling,
I know is here to say.
I can’t stay firm,
I have to hurt.
And feel like dirt,
And be all alert.
I feel like…
I own no worth.
I feel…
Deprest,
And stressed.
And broken,
And disturbed…
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deathdrop
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2004-10-21 14:06:36]
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Re: I feel like…
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:05:36 PM AEST
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i wish i could take away your heartache hun, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I feel like…
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by Live2Die on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:07:47 PM AEST
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| Wish I could take all the pain away...good poem. =)...blasting music can work miracles... |
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Re: I feel like…
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:18:13 PM AEST
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I know where you are coming from on this one.At the moment I feel like a mouse on a wheel, I do it because I have always done it, but never really sure why
Take care and hope you have better times soon
Steve |
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Re: I feel like…
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:39:36 PM AEST
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I feel like... that way to sometimes... we all do... whether we want to admit it or not...wish I could take it all away... but I can't... all I can do is pray for u... and offer my words of encouragement... and Simply love u as best I can from here!
Good poem... babe... jus write ur heartache away...
~Donna~ |
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Re: I feel like…
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by Chrissylee on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:02:35 PM AEST
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| i am glad you are expressing yourself and i hope tht it is helping you on the inside. let it all out and it will help you heal inside... no matter how long it takes keep writing |
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Re: I feel like…
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:47:44 PM AEST
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| Try the music of the Grateful Dead. You'll never be lost or lonely there. Let the music heal you sister. Much peace. I always look forward to seeing your poems. I know you're still alive when you're writing. Keep it up. Also check out the poetry of Robert Hunter he wrote alot of lyrics for the Grateful Dead. He's a great poet. |
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Re: I feel like…
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by pixie on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 05:31:00 AM AEST
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awww hun, I am sorry that your pain is still haunting you, I really hope that one day you will be able to let go of all the hurt and move on with your life, *hugs*
takecare
pixie xx |
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