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No Hiding
Contributed by
RavenousDesire
on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 07:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sitting here in this dirty bed
thinking of my blood so red
Fantasizing of my death, so free
my blood gushing so gracefully..
To live on, I dont know how
Death is beautiful, I can see it now:
Lying in the darkness all alone
with these open cuts, cut to the bone
The noose hugging my neck so tight
as my body dangles from a tree
It's wonderful, such a relieving sight
Just to think, soon I will be free.
100 pills flushed down my throat
all different kinds, no prescription note.
To use a gun, I must be brave
just pull the trigger and myself I save.
These cuts in which I confide
to get my mind off the pain inside
And even if I wanted to,
I cannot hide
from these thoughts, my fantasies
of suicide.
Copyright ©
RavenousDesire
... [
2002-11-16 19:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: No Hiding
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 11:00:26 PM AEST (User
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Wow this was pretty touchy! i really hope that
you are not thinking this! How sad! Christina |
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Re: No Hiding
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 02:03:54 AM AEST (User
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I have been here in this place
many times, it's a very dark place
to be, My heart goes out to you if
this is how you really feel, I know
nothing said will change that feeling
but i would like to read more of your
poetry if you don't mind, Thanks for
sharing this one it really hit home with me
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: No Hiding
(User Rating: 1 ) by frozensuicide on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:14:34 AM AEST (User
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oooh la laaa now i am in love with this poem! you have depth wiht a beatful rhythem. i love it. its great. i know the feeling too.... we're not alone!
well tootaloo.
hug a moose! |
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Re: No Hiding
(User Rating: 1 ) by RavenousDesire on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 01:17:47 PM AEST (User
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hey thanks for your comment and you can read more of my stuff at TheStarLiteCafe.com thats where all my stuff is. I was just trying this place out. thanks again.
raven |
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