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Love's Hangover
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:08:19 AM in AEST
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Love’s hangover has got me,
Telling me that I can’t be free,
Whispering softly into my ear,
Letting me know it’ll always be near.
It swims around inside my head,
Making me sometimes wish I were dead,
Love’s hangover also know as depression,
How do I get rid of it that’s the question?
To be honest I don’t think I ever will,
As from me it hasn’t yet had its fill,
It strips the flesh from my very bones,
Leaving me naked & feeling all alone.
Do you suffer from this type of pain?
Stopping you from feeling alive again,
Love is painful & it really can hurt,
It kicks you as you lay wounded in the dirt.
I can feel is surging around my veins,
It has got tight hold of my reins,
I want to keep my love without the heartache,
I am a porcelain doll who is about to break.
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pixie
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Re: Love's Hangover
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by reprobate on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:16:22 AM AEST
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had, no have that pain and it truly stinks out loud...have a smile, have a hug and/or whatever you feel will help with this
thanks for letting me share your vision |
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Re: Love's Hangover
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 12:25:43 PM AEST
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Yes, I do know! I once wrote a poem called china about myself because I felt like a china doll. One thing I can tell you about depression is that it never does go away completely, but that doesn't mean there's no hope. It can become much less, and the symptoms can become more manageable. Don't give up. With God's grace, you can come to a place where you will find contentment. I know that because I have been there.
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Re: Love's Hangover
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by irishgirl812 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 01:14:26 PM AEST
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THIS IS A REALLY WELL WRITTEN POEM
YOU CAN REALLY RELATE TO IT, IM SURE EVERYONE HAS HAD THAT HORRIBLE DEPRESSED FEELING LEFT AFTER A LOVE GONE BAD. YOU FEEL THE WRITERS PAIN. YOU ACTUALLY GET THE FEELING OF THIS NAGGING EMOTION THAT WONT LET YOU GO. |
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Re: Love's Hangover
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 01:17:01 PM AEST
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AWWWW pix this poem is so sad.
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Re: Love's Hangover
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 02:05:14 PM AEST
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oh hun, my heart goes out to you, i wish i could take all your sadness, im so used to mine it would have plenty of company lol, big hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Love's Hangover
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 02:42:00 PM AEST
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Loves Hangover....perfect title Pixie.
A hangover brought about by a bottoms up of the cup of rejection. Outstanding write
Roses
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Re: Love's Hangover
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 05:07:08 PM AEST
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Pixie, You are such a gifted poet and you always create such masterpieces. Just know that YOU are LOVED and CHERISHED by many reading fans. You are a very SPECIAL Lady with a heart full of love that pours out through your poetry thus making perfect creations of word art for the readers to feel. Feeling the words a poet presents is a great feat Pixie and you always succeed. Your Dear Friend.
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Re: Love's Hangover
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:31:17 AM AEST
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Very sad. Great poem though. There is hope though.
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