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MR. HATTER...Party of one
Contributed by
reprobate
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Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:58:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A moment of fear
becomes a minute of hate
A searing pain that stabs 'right here'
causing tearful hours that even a prayer won't abate
Another day of darkness
in the months of a rundown prophet
A flash in dire years of agonized sadness
pushed to the cliff and forcing the jump off it
Time left you behind
while you wrestled with your madness
The age-old battle that's only in your mind
living life's void all the while feigning gladness
What is your seed of discontent
that keeps you lingering on the brink
Why must each breath be that of lament
and you hide your disease with smoke, lies and drink
From the silvered pane
a clock weary visage stares back
No answers to be found within that sad insane
a history ravaged soul now fades finally to black
Copyright ©
reprobate
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2004-10-21 10:58:54]
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Re: MR. HATTER...Party of one
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by pixie on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:22:29 AM AEST
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dark and a very pained write, well expressed, hope that your pain will ease,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: MR. HATTER...Party of one
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by UnmovedMover on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 08:08:59 PM AEST
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| doesn't make any sense |
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Re: MR. HATTER...Party of one
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by Channing on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 04:29:30 PM AEST
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Interesting write, I like the dark mood of it.
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