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The Shadows
Contributed by
Niceliece
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Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:45:03 AM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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My life is a cold wasteland of infinite time
Strangled by the ropes that have yet to unravel
Caressed in the arms of poverty
Yet quickened by the ambition of determination
I am a dove, casting a spell over anyone in my presence
Climbing a never-ending ladder, surrounded by a cascade of darkness
The world and I hide ourselves from one-another
like a vampire, to light
Open-ended visions cast a shadow of my future, my life, my destiny
There is a light that I can see
That shines it's glimmer of hope
That it is only now, that I remain
In the dark
Copyright ©
Niceliece
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2004-10-21 10:45:03]
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Re: The Shadows
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by reprobate on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:00:50 AM AEST
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cool...keep looking up and out.
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Re: The Shadows
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by pixie on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:15:07 AM AEST
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sometimes it is the hope that keeps us going, please don't ever lose sight of the light that you can see in the distance, it will become closer as you become stronger,
great write
takecare,
pixie xx
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Re: The Shadows
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by bonita2689 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 10:19:28 AM AEST
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Such a compelling and descriptive poem. Keep it up!
-Kristin |
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