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As I go
Contributed by
crash
on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:11:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As I go
through my days
I mess up
in soo many ways
As I go
I make gains
but more I find
are my pains
As I go
through each night
I realize
that I'm not right
As I go
down my trail
I end up
chasing my tail
As I go
life is well
though I live
in my own hell
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crash
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2004-10-21 10:11:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: As I go
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rxqueen on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 06:04:54 AM AEST (User
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I liked it, it was simple and easy to read, yet you conveyed your message very well. |
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