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Emotional Insomnia
Contributed by
crash
on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:57:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am sittin' here
after another sleepless night
I don't know why
but it seems I've lost my sight
all that I do is wrong
for I can't see the right
If I wasn't so strong
I'd have have quit the fight
I'm wide awake
my chance of sleep is gone
thanks to the many words
I've needed to say so long
but all I do
is write a poem and song
all my thoughts
never leave my mind
around my heart
chains still bind
as of late
I never unwind
My mind is groggy
weary is my heart
It pains me
that we are apart
I've been all for you
since the start
I am always waking
I never sleep
the way it is
til' I'm yours to keep
Copyright ©
crash
... [
2004-10-21 09:57:19]
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Re: Emotional Insomnia
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by Niceliece on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:49:06 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem. Softly spoken but passionate to the point. I really enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Emotional Insomnia
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by Sinn on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:31:05 AM AEST
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| Great Poem Homie, I Like it |
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Re: Emotional Insomnia
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 05:05:19 PM AEST
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Very moving. So sad, but well written, crash.
I have felt like this many, many times.
You excellently captured a moment and
re-created it through verse.
Wonderful.
~Breezy
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