|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Tides
Contributed by
Wrybod
on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 04:26:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Fingerlike streams
creeping higher
flood passive furrows
with desire.
Ripples caress
each eager form
promising
the coming storm.
Deeper yet
the tide incises
higher yet
it's body rises.
Waves of lusting
passion roar.
Pure white horses
pound the shore.
A consumation
by the sea
excites!...delights!
the estuary.
Then slowly, gently,
comes the ebb
tranquility
extends it's web.
Participants
a calmness feign...
until the flood tide
comes again.
Copyright ©
Wrybod
... [
2004-10-21 04:26:42]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Tides
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 06:19:19 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
emotional and written with beauty,
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: Tides
(User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 06:40:17 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow had my style written all over this magnificent description of emotions
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
|
|
Re: Tides
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 07:31:22 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Sensual and allegorical.
Well done. |
|
|
Re: Tides
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 07:39:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Awsome write. Love the style and deep emotion. Can't wait to read your next.......Mike |
|
|
Re: Tides
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:11:51 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A very impressive poem, well construed.
The tide goes out to sea, but it always flows back to the sand that calls it.
I say bring on the swell, that is what makes life interesting.
Good to see you writing agian.
Kie |
|
|
Re: Tides
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:34:27 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow!!!
This is so sensual and I love the vivid descriptions and imagery.
So glad your back baob, excellent poem
Love Dawny x |
|
|
Re: Tides
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 03:15:01 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very creative writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
|
|
Re: Tides
(User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:50:22 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
oh dear bob, my ever friend
i have come to read again
this new you a gentle wave
this treasure my heart shall save
much different from two years ago
beautiful in it's caressing flow...
michele |
|
|
Re: Tides
(User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 01:09:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I could see the sea and tide ,felt as if I were there you describe it so well in a beautiful way.x |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
