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I'm Me
Contributed by
Starlilly
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Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:56:07 AM in AEST
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If I showed who it is I am to you
I don't think you would understand
Not because you wouldn't want to
But because not just anyone can
Do you really want to know the real me?
Do you really want to be let on the inside?
I am not even sure you will like what it is you see
And then you will get why I choose to just hide
You will find that I see too much with my eyes
And I feel a little too much with my soul
And in case you chose to not realize
At this point in time I am working towards a goal
There are many times I let my heart take control
And several moments when I'd rather be left alone
If all of this sounds crazy, I don't care truth be told
My words can be harsh and may chill you to the bone
There are things I have never even said
Not because a part of me doesn't long to
But because they don't sound the same as they do inside my head
And as much as I want to, I am scared to open up, even to you
Copyright© Renee Oct 12 2004
Copyright ©
Starlilly
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Re: I'm Me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 04:02:25 AM AEST
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Once someone has been in love and then hurt, it is usually very hard to fall in love again, let alone trusting someone.
If they love you enough then they will understand, love isnt something to be rushed, it is something to be treasured and something that only happens over time.
Beautiful poem showing alot of fear towards being hurt again, and feelings bring played with, written with strength, and passion, awesome write. |
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Re: I'm Me
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 04:14:34 AM AEST
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| this iz awesome, just how i feel |
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Re: I'm Me
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by Saz on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 05:10:18 AM AEST
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| Ah, this is kinda sad... but in time you will be able to open up fully, and if the person really wants to get to that special place, they'll wait for you, and no matter how chilling to the bone that place is, they'll stand by you. |
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Re: I'm Me
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:11:31 AM AEST
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Although I already read this one before, it is a great poem, showing your vulnerability in a touching way!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: I'm Me
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by sammydid on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:27:09 PM AEST
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it is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all, right?
or am i just being stupid?
perhaps your heart has been broken to many times to try again...
but i hope you do.
-natalie |
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