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When You Were Here
Contributed by
youngin
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Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 12:09:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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when you were here tha other night, boy, you know what you did to me
right when you touched me again, i felt tha way i used to, i was so happy
we were holding each other so close and so tight
i know i could have just layed there next to you for tha whole night
when you leaned over to kiss me, i could tell there was still something there, i could see it in your eye
but i didnt even wanna stop and think or talk about it cuz i was caught up in tha moment, you were gettin me high
all these feelings that you make me feel when were together
i was feelin like i was meant to be held in your arms forever
its like things start runnin through my mind, yet i cant think of anything at all
i could just be sitting down but then think of you and feel like im gonna fall
everything that i feel about you boy, is just so hard to explain
because most of tha time, youre tha only thing that keeps goin through my brain
whether or not to waste my time on someone whos not willing to waste theirs
cuz what i really dont wanna do, is get my heart broken again cuz now sometimes i get scared
cuz i know that everything that im feelin is totally and completely real
so please boy, wont you tell me how you feel?
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2004-10-21 00:09:12]
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Re: When You Were Here
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 01:17:30 AM AEST
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| cool poem, written showing remembered feelings, and hope, cheers for sharing |
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Re: When You Were Here
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by Nate on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 01:25:35 AM AEST
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im crying wow, no poem has ever done that to me, your poem explains everything i feel towards my best friend wow. .. .ty for putting it in words i couldnt can i use your poem to explain to her?
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Re: When You Were Here
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 01:30:25 AM AEST
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wow this is such a beautiful poem, i can relate to this one alot. thanks for posting.
Jane |
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