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Tearing Me Apart
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 11:16:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Can’t you see your hurting me
Tearing me apart
You know how much I love him
And still you break my heart
He holds you in his arm
The way that he held me
He gives a sweet kiss goodbye
I can’t bare to see
Every time he’s near you
I just break down and cry
I don’t know if you notice
But I feel like I want to die
You tell me you’re my friend
And that you love me so
Then why do you cause such pain
I’d really like to know
I won’t tell you how I feel
But if you were my friend
You would see the pain this causes me
And make your relationship end
I know this may sound selfish
But if you only knew
The way this cuts me deep inside
Just see it from my view
What if it were you
I know you’d feel the same
So why would you do it
This is not some kind of game
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CrimsonTears
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2004-10-20 23:16:27]
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Re: Tearing Me Apart
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 12:04:31 AM AEST
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I felt this poem. I could speak these words!! Great write. I love the way you expressed your feelings it came across clearly.
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Re: Tearing Me Apart
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 01:28:58 AM AEST
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| I feel for your agony, and the pain of losing something close, but you wrote this well, showing great depth and strength. |
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Re: Tearing Me Apart
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by pixie on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 06:25:05 AM AEST
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Awww this is very heart breaking, to see your ex with another is so painful beyond words, but you have expressed your pain well, a very touching poem,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Tearing Me Apart
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by CAUGHTinAdream on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 02:31:21 PM AEST
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| omg I love this! I can totally relate! Great job! all of ur poems are wonderful, keep it up :) |
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