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.crushed.
Contributed by
Chanti
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Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 10:59:21 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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i cannot fight it anymore
'thats what you get for taking what isnt yours
this is what happens you try to love
and feel emotions you were never worthy of'
To my heart: im sorry that i ever tried
all that i taught you was a lie
i know that ive lost all your trust
there was never love,
there is only lust
To my soul: well, what can i say
at the time you seemed a small price to pay
but now im so hollow inside
this empty feeling wont subside
and now i know
i am alone
... i wouldnt have it any other way.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2004-10-20 22:59:21]
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Re: .crushed.
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 11:17:38 PM AEST
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Nice poem i liked it....great job
Lots of Love
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Re: .crushed.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 01:54:46 AM AEST
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This is brilliant, it flows perfectly and the words just...fit. I love the way you ended it too, great write.
Take care
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Re: .crushed.
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 10:44:13 PM AEST
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what a poignant poem that rings with
sadness and distrust. It was poetically, yet
simpally written. I loved this a wonderful
anthem for pain and loneliness.
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Re: .crushed.
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by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 01:00:38 PM AEST
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"To my heart: im sorry that i ever tried
all that i taught you was a lie
i know that ive lost all your trust
there was never love,
there is only lust"
Couldn't be spoken more true.
Splendid. |
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