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You Would Be Missed
Contributed by
screwup
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 09:34:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Please don't do it my friend
Please... don't let this be the end
You are cared for too much
By all the lives you touch
I know you don't think that right now
As all you can think about is escaping the pain
But you'll leave others like me going insane
You can't say goodbye
Because you just can't die
Don't carry out your plan
Don't do it... you have so many fans
Just don't set a date
In your life, it's not too late
You are only 16 years old
And I know your life has grown cold
Just think about what you'd leave behind
Alot of cuts and corrupted minds
10- 20- 2004
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2004-10-20 21:34:13]
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Re: You Would Be Missed
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 09:47:07 PM AEST
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| excellent write. yes, please stay rosie. =] |
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Re: You Would Be Missed
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 11:18:09 PM AEST
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| Cool poem, written with pure heart wrenching feeling, I hope all hears the pleas. |
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Re: You Would Be Missed
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 02:59:04 AM AEST
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| i love it!!! plz dont go rosie.. |
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Re: You Would Be Missed
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by pixie on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 06:35:30 AM AEST
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this is a moving write, I think that she is just in need of some help and is crying out, she is very young and there is alot going on in her head, but if people show her that life is for living hopefully she will listen,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: You Would Be Missed
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 02:21:15 PM AEST
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ow Deanna!
*hugs*
*sob*
i've already Pmed you ealier.
*sobs again*
do i really mean that much to you guys?
gosh!
i don't know what to say... |
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