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Waiting
Contributed by
sorryiforgot2smile
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Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:16:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You caught me bearing weight bearing it all, to try to keep what was in place. Rewind, to a place in time where everything meant the world to me, where you meant the world to me. Now, frale and fragile when the windblows I crack under pressure. Last chance, to make amends because the train might leave the station and I will not wait for you to come home.
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Re: Waiting
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 08:19:26 PM AEST
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| good write. i wish there was more. |
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Re: Waiting
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 04:15:22 AM AEST
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| Cool poem short yet to the point, vivid and clear images and showing how you feel, awsome poem. |
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Re: Waiting
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by Saz on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 06:00:46 AM AEST
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| Short; Precise; Good stuff. |
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