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On the Brink
Contributed by
CaddishCut
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Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:04:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Need to find a way out of here from within
Pain taken by the blade that pierces my skin
Feel the corners of my mind slowly caving in
Pressure from the outside world and all of it's kin
Glimmering sticks of silver, black, red
Thoughts of what it can do as I lay in my bed
Surely it is something I fear I may dread
Get these thoughts out of my dreary head
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2004-10-20 16:04:05]
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Re: On the Brink
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:06:07 PM AEST
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| 'cousre it makes sense!! It was really good, I really enjoyed it. Great job expressing yourself! ;-) |
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Re: On the Brink
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:56:43 PM AEST
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