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don't pretend
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I don’t understand why I can’t go on, it’s all changed
I’ve lost all hope and I don’t know how to cope
I don’t know where im heading or where I am
This isn’t where I want to be, in me
All I see around me means nothing
I don’t understand what chains me to the cutting
Because they’re not real
They’ve forgotten how to feel
I’ll never make it there again
I’ll never make it through the rain
And just for once youre gonna have to trust in me
I’m fed up of pretending I know how to be
And now, forever, im just gonna stand here
Im gonna let you do everything you think you can
My eyes are so full of hatred, and fear
All I ever wanted was to hold your hand
So throw me down, I can see the light, now it’s so near
don’t ever pretend you understand
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2002-11-16 15:00:00]
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Re: don't pretend
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by OreO on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 03:12:43 PM AEST
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I can relate to this one alot,
it's a sad dark place to be in
hope your not actually going
through all this, if you are my heart
goes out to you, Thanks for sharing
this one, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: don't pretend
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by Dark_Angel_BabAy on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 01:51:03 PM AEST
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| This poem is really good, keep up the hard work. |
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Re: don't pretend
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by thorns on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:49:37 PM AEST
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| and tis ISN'T your best? this is beautiful. this is powerful. |
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Re: don't pretend
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:18:17 PM AEST
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wow... how did I miss this Lucie? Beautiful poem I love the image of u being chained to the cutting. Another masterpiece.
Love you,
Joel |
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Re: don't pretend
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by etherealgurl on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 06:18:27 PM AEST
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| for such a young writer, you have incredible vision and creativity....I hope you are doing well, hon! Great write...as always! |
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Re: don't pretend
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by Jaz17 on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 11:03:18 PM AEST
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| wow... so much feeling especially at the end... your last stanza truely makes me feel... love the last line... |
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