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I Try To Mend
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
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Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:02:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I think it's time to take our well deserved break, I know that it could be my life mistake.
But I can't live my life like it's fake.
You know I love you, and I sear baby it's true.
But I jut can't live with myself, if I keep letting you do the things you do.
You might just think it's a game, little do you know I'm the one left with the shame.
You think that a cheap ring will do the work.
I'm sorry baby, but your just a jerk.
People tink that you o0o so sweet.
Butn they meet you, it's a different story.
Our few years together are coming to an end.
Try to mend my broken heart indeed, but your the only thing that I'll ever need.
I'll take my shattere heart and walk alone.
The scars you left are deep in my skin.
Left alone I try to mend.
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2004-10-20 16:02:33]
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Re: I Try To Mend
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:16:51 PM AEST
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That had some good rythm, the content fit ok.
Good job. |
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Re: I Try To Mend
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:43:30 PM AEST
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| sad but a really a i think i don't know but if he broke you heart its just your fault for giving it to him maybe too easily |
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Re: I Try To Mend
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by -Lord-Vince-Black- on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:47:39 AM AEST
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A dark emotical love poem,
I dont think its one of your best,
But still I like it,
Lord Vince Black |
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