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In your arms...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:55:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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In your arms I wish to stay forever,
Blanketed with your unconditional love...
A touch of hands,
A caress of lips...
Here is where I am free,
You here with me...
In your comforting arms,
My tears cease,
My anguish, gone...
I can tell you anything,
So trusting, those Heaven eyes...
You've held my hand through everything,
And given me hope to hold on to...
Life has gotten much brighter, since you came along…
The skies, always clear,
My Muse's children winking at us enchantingly...
For it is only in the dark embrace of the Night,
Where I feel you; your tantalizing caress...
Where I hear you; your enthralling Melodie...
Where I see you; your beautiful face that forever inhabits my dreams...
Our eyes linger upon each other,
Cherishing the splendor in which is set in them...
The soul is revealed,
So luminous, it blinds me...
My obscure soul could never compare,
But you tell me that no essence could ever compete with mine,
Perpetual beauty inhabiting it...
My heart swells, and tears pour forth,
Not of sadness, but of pure joy...
I am complete; this life of mine, forevermore flooding with love and light...
Two souls, two hearts, joined as one...
A bleeding flower can be cured,
By the hands of a caring gardener...
She shall flourish,
And embellish the lives of many...
Only in love and care,
Can this rose live again...
In my darkest of times,
You've held me close,
Whispering softly words of sympathy and love...
Such divine words you create...
Clasp me, Cheri,
Clasp me tight,
Yes, like that; so lovingly...
My hopes and dreams have finally come true...
Only in your arms can I be free,
And feel the passions of love once more...
So distant, and yet, so near,
I yearn for this moment to never die…
I must leave you, only for a short while,
But in my dreams, you shall be,
Until my return…
I only wish to rest forevermore in your sweet embrace,
And soar high with you...
Eternal is this love,
Eternal are we…
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2004-10-20 15:55:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In your arms...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:31:58 PM AEST (User
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Could it be, that this was one of those suddenly wrestling itself out poems that seem so perfect ? As if it couldn't be held in any longer and was out and on paper before you even realized you had been holding it back ? The clarity of the emotions here is fantastic. The longing the convey and create is nearly superb.
Mon coeur saute un battement ~
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Re: In your arms...
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_bear on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 05:04:26 PM AEST (User
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I would seperate evermore/ inyour sweet embrace .. I just think it looks better..I guess it's good. We all have out own taste..this is too sweet for me..kind of goes with Bruce and his style; that's just me. For the style I guess it's great. If this was food..it would be loaded with calories..told Bruce that too..lol. don't mind me..mine is..well..gimme cheese for my whine..variety makes poetry beautiful. |
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Re: In your arms...
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 05:46:02 PM AEST (User
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: In your arms...
(User Rating: 1 ) by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:25:19 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful write, Steph...I loved this poem...It was very seriously wonderful
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Re: In your arms...
(User Rating: 1 ) by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:01:25 AM AEST (User
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Where I see you; your beautiful face that forever inhabits my dreams...
Our eyes linger upon each other,
Cherishing the splendour in which is set in them...
The soul is revealed,
So luminous, it blinds me...
My obscure soul could never compare,
But you tell me that no essence could ever compete with mine,
Perpetual beauty inhabiting it...
My heart swells, and tears pour forth,
Not of sadness, but of pure joy...
Such love and longing ah how I feel these words so intense golden and divine. It is the flow of words that hold the beauty.
I somewhat like the word 'symmetry,' it kind of symbolises perfection. 'Ardour' as well! Somehow, it sounds french and french is beautiful. … .....another word for your poetry.
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx
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