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Overload
Contributed by
starlilly
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:06:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Finding it all out
Numbing
Stories I am told
Horrifying
Love that was a lie
Disappointing
Crumbing inside
Terrifying
False hands that touched me
Disgusting
A facade of a life
Confusing
Information overload
Crying
Copyright© Renee October 20
Copyright ©
starlilly
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2004-10-20 15:06:40]
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Re: Overload
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:12:26 PM AEST
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The simplicity
enhances the
grief in
this
little poem.
Well done.
--Mothy |
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Re: Overload
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by Saz on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:30:41 PM AEST
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| Simple. Yet effective. |
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Re: Overload
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:14:34 PM AEST
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| good write, simple and yet gives a person emotion while reading this |
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Re: Overload
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 05:21:30 PM AEST
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strong, beautifully written, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Overload
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:13:20 AM AEST
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Sometimes life seems to overcome you... You've described this process very wel... It is good to let it all wash over you and then let it flow away, so that it is no longer in your system anymore...
Hugs,
Hur |
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