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Thinking of Suicide
Contributed by
xGothic_Suicidex
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 02:45:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My thoughts of life are useless.
My mind is thinking of one thing right now.
My body is being torn apart.
I can picture the blood running down my arm.
The tears going down my face.
The rush going through my body.
I can picture standing in one spot.
Collapsing in the floor blood splattering everywhere.
People screaming help her, help her she is bleeding.
I' m gasping for air.
I picture me taking my last breath.
Then i close my eyes and blood everywhere, people crying thining its there fault for me shooting myself.
I picture myself in a black bag being taken to the coroners office.
I see me laying on a hard metal table being observed by doctors and they tell each other why did she have to do this she was a beautiful young girl
i am 16 years old and this will happen in a few hours.
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Re: Thinking of Suicide
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by Saz on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 02:50:47 PM AEST
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| PLEASE DON'T!!!! It's not worth taking you're life, what ever it is that has happened, there are other ways!! |
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Re: Thinking of Suicide
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by Clementine on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:08:17 PM AEST
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| I hope these are just words and that you won't act on them. Take it from someone who's felt this more times than I'd like to admit. Whatever's causing your pain isn't worth you taking your life. |
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Re: Thinking of Suicide
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:15:03 PM AEST
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Bodybag...
It's like a vision
I had the other day.
Hope you can find something
to save you, but I know
it's not always that easy.
--Mothy |
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Re: Thinking of Suicide
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:27:38 PM AEST
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You have such passion and talent! Please don't let it die with you.... Live, and let the words and things you could change with them live too. I know there's a lot that's pulling you to the gun and the black bag, but... I dunno. Live just to spite people! I dunno. I live to try and change the world, others live for family, yet others live because they fear there will be no grand release, but whatever. Just find a reason inside yourself, no matter how small, and drain it until there's nothing left. If you can survive a few more hours, can't you survive a few more hours after that? Then mebe, just see how you feel a few hours after that? Just live in the moment and live like there's no tomorrow. That's all that i can say. Sure, I've felt the way you do, a lot. Nearly everyday. Just try to survive bit by bit.
Love n' Hugs,
Gigi |
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Re: Thinking of Suicide
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by alliecat on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 10:39:26 PM AEST
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if you need a reason to live....live for me....i would love to see more of your poetry....use your poetry as a way to cope....give yourself time
Sarah |
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Re: Thinking of Suicide
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:16:10 PM AEST
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Sad write. Great though. There are people who care. Suicide is the wrong answer.
Spazzo |
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