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Sometimes...(Save Me)
Contributed by
iluvpencils
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:54:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sometimes I just feel like dying
I get so cold here...
So alone
Sometimes I wish that you would find me
Lift me out of this grave
You layed me in
I can almost hear your voice
Whispering to the world
"I hate this life"
And I cry...
I would give anything
Just to see you
I would give anything
To be in your arms right now
Sometimes, this life is too much to bear
Sometimes I just feel
So alone...
So empty here with no one to save me
Sometimes I wish that you would come down
Lift me up
On your wings
Fly, fly away...
Fly away from this grave
You've layed me in...
And I can almost hear your voice
Promising to stay forever
I can almost feel your pain...
Only scratching the surface
But drawing so much blood
I would give anything
Just to feel your touch one time
I would do anything
To be in your arms right now
Save me from this cold
Taking over me
Sometimes I feel so lonely
No one seems to care
I think of your screaming
And long for you to be here
I look to the sky and wonder if you'll come down
Come down and lift me up
From this grave that you have
Layed me in
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2004-10-20 13:54:25]
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Re: Sometimes...(Save Me)
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by AndTheFoolShallBurn on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:58:29 PM AEST
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| nice. sounds promising. |
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Re: Sometimes...(Save Me)
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by Saz on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 02:08:12 PM AEST
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| This is so sad! You have real talent and raw emotion! Wish you every sucess with the guitar version! |
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