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A Leakage From Her Skin
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:27:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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A leakage from her skin
One that drips down her forearm
To a tissue that was never there
A color so brilliantly thought up of
It stands out on the white
That will never be thrown away
As if nothing ever happened…
Only when it heals it will seem so far away
So unreal
It became a regret as soon as it happened
After the color released from her skin
So bright and beautiful
It healed a feeling of misery
Leaving her with the feeling of shame
From how she destroyed herself…
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Re: A Leakage From Her Skin
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:39:18 PM AEST
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Like the use of imagery
and strange title.
Beautiful and disturbing.
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Re: A Leakage From Her Skin
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by EternalNight4x on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:08:39 PM AEST
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| I agree with theMoth...it was very well written and well expressed, I can relate to this poem as well, I know hwo it feels to cut and then after you regret doing so, but the cycle continues...very well written keep posting |
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Re: A Leakage From Her Skin
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:42:08 AM AEST
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and
Who cares
Self abuse may sometimes scare
If you were to die afterward
Within a year
Who would remember
Disterbing poem,but keep writting
Sinned |
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