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For Once
Contributed by
Rxqueen
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:50:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sitting on the beach
tasting the salty sea air
I felt the sand betwean my toes
and wished you were there
The sun beat down on my back
and a breeze played in my hair
I picked up a faded broken shell
and wished you were there
I watched as a fish jumped out of the water
seemingly with no care
I rolled the shell betwean my fingers
and wished you were there
A wave crashed down on the shore
the water so crystal clear
for once in my life I felt truely alive
and I wished you were there
The smell of the ocean filled my nose
as I caught myself in a stare
the day would have been completely perfect
if only you had been there...
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
... [
2004-10-20 06:50:56]
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Re: For Once
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by Aquaelius on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:07:21 AM AEST
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| I really like this one, it paints a nice picture... I could really see it. Good one. |
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Re: For Once
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:43:13 AM AEST
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| Warm yet sad. Great write thanks.......Mike |
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Re: For Once
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by UnlovedChild on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:36:24 PM AEST
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| Sweet one ... excellent poem...I hope this someone you miss is one that you have found! |
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